Open Poetry #14 |
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To be beautiful is... (for Elizabeth 'Liz' Santos) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium ![]() |
Beautiful is the one who shines in an everlasting smile, with a brightness that clothes naked eyes like sight to the blind. Beautiful is free and flying towards the blue, with wings marked by joytipped rays of candid happiness. Beautiful is the one who flows like a brook to the sea, along the dancing reeds swaying with the winds staying alive in belief. Beautiful is a wonderful poetess with dignified grace, a charming persona, and much more... Ah! To be beautiful is to be our friend, Liz!!! ![]() [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
and I am sure LIz will greatly appreciate this... nice work.. might check this line.. stayin alive in belief. was meant to be staying? Always a pleasure to read your words! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Cpat, Thanks for pointing the typo... Oh how I dislike these little bugs... Liz has been writing so many beautiful and inspiring poems, that I absolutely felt I had to write something... and I hope I did an okay job... Regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 06-22-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
you did a wonderful job Sudhir.. wonderful indeed! |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...I adore your use of the "dictionary of your heart" to express such a true and accurate description of beautiful!! Fancy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sudhir, You have no idea how much this poem means to me. It is such a beautiful poem, and I will cherish it always. It comes to me at a time when I needed someone to recognize the happiness of my spirit, at a time when deception has caused me so much distress in the last few months. But when I write it's the joy people see, and not the tears. You have written an exquisite rose and gently placed it in my hand, and I thank you with all my heart, dear poet of India. Liz |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sudhir, it even smells sweetly....a loving tribute to a wonderful Lady.... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
love this one,you have written a wonderful tribute to a amazing poet ![]() |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, She is a wonderful lady and deserves a rose. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
she certainly is and you've written a beautiful tribute to her! "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just beautiful Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Marvelous and so well said tribute, my friend..gentle smile |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Leave it to you, Sudhir, to recognize beauty of spirit where it exists....you are that kind of man. A beautiful tribute to a beautiful poet and lady... |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wonderful...Lizzy deserves this... well done Suddy... ![]() |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yes...Grace has always been a word that comes to mind when thinking of Liz... kind and sincere tribute to one of Passions most gifted poets... she inspires us all and not just in poetry but how to live in grace as well. and Sud..your lights shining here too ![]() |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You've captured her essence, Sudhir, with your beautiful words! Very lovely! |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Beautiful and deserved tribute to "one of the family." Well done. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My good friends, I am extremely thankful for all your kind words... Many thanks to you Liz, for being the epitome of beautiful ... This place is Magic and you are one of the special phenomenons here... I am glad I could put words to what I felt... Regards to all, Sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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