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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Please don’t stare at the lonely ground, that’s not where I’ll be found. I’ve not gone ever from thee, how I wish I could make you see. I never left you, if you will agree, as I live forever in your memory. For I am the thoughts waking in the night, leading you to paths of that memory bright. I am the wind that kisses your lips, a gentle breeze caressing with light fingertips. The call of the dove with its mournful cry, when sensing the tear formed in your eye. I am the grass in fields we would stroll, the warming sun that touches the soul. The firefly with it’s winking light, to make you smile in the late twilight. All this and more so you know I cared, to remind you of love we both have shared. As long as thought, I am with you still, for there is a destiny for us to fulfill. A pathway that continues to carry us on, another time when love sings its song. For this was not only the time that would be, until we are reunited, you and me. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Logan- very beautiful and comforting thoughts here, and you've penned them so lovingly..  thanks so much for sharing this.. ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*SIGH* :lovya: Did I ever tell you that you write beautifully, Sweet One?  |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Vicky, thank you so much for your sweet comments. I apprecitate them and for you being here to read...gentle smile Very gentle smile, Jenn, lovya too, and geez, you do know how to humble me. Thank you, gentle maid |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
Never more thn a memory away |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is really excellent work... got such a lovely feel to it... regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice Logan! We do not truly lose those who go on before us, if we hold them in our hearts and minds.. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Exquisite poem, you touch my heart as always. I hope those we love really do carry that memory with them always. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Logan~ 'As long as thought, I am with you still' Says it all for me~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
AS beautiful as it is comforting. Cor |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
forevernbluejeans, thank you for your read and your comments, and you are right, memories are all that is left, thank goodness for them...gentle smile Ahh, Sudhir, I appreciate your comments more than you would realize..thank you for being here...gentle smile Cpat Hair, gentle smile, we have all had many in our hearts and minds to remember, thank you for your comments and read. Sandra, gentle smile, I am glad you liked the read and, of course they do. Then Marge, once again you have made my day..very gentle smile Ahhh, gentle Cor, my dear friend..thank you twice over for being here. And pleased it had some comfort to it..most gentle smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I never left you, if you will agree, as I live forever in your memory. For I am the thoughts waking in the night, leading you to paths of that memory bright. I am the wind that kisses your lips, a gentle breeze caressing with light fingertips. The call of the dove with its mournful cry, when sensing the tear formed in your eye. =========================== All this and more so you know I cared, to remind you of love we both have shared. ============================ As long as thought, I am with you still, for there is a destiny for us to fulfill. A pathway that continues to carry us on, another time when love sings its song. For this was not only the time that would be, until we are reunited, you and me. ============================ Logan... this poem is more exquisite and beautiful than I have words for...and touches me in places deep.... believe me when I tell you I feel every moving, gentle, word. This was written by someone who has butterfly wisdom and a poets soul... and it now goes in my treasure box and engraved on my heart as well.  I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Janet Marie, most gentle smile,.. you know... Thank you for such kind words |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Logan~ This is truly kissed by butterfly wings, as my sweet sis JM so eloquently stated...this is so tender and beautiful, the comfort found in this weave cannot be measured by human hand...only heart and soul. Beautiful work Sir Poet~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Thank you Butterfly for your gentleness and kind words. I appreciate you being here, and am glad that these words were felt that way, thank you...gentle smile |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is beautiful, Logan... so much tenderness, so much comfort, so much promise. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Love's memory is a fine thing, indeed, when what was there, was the ultimate of all things.... Wonderful! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Suthern, thank you for being here and for your kind reply. I am glad you enjoyed my efforts..gentle smile Ahh, Decaflame, when all is said and done, is not the memories all we have to hold and cherish? Thank you for being here and your thoughtful words...gentle smile |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...and I AM the one written about here... lovely... "...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..." |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah Logan...memories can last a lifetime and beyond, what gentle words of love that is cherished. "Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very romantic writing! Reflective of such a deep love... "For I am the thoughts waking in the night, leading you to paths of that memory bright. I am the wind that kisses your lips, a gentle breeze caressing with light fingertips. The call of the dove with its mournful cry, when sensing the tear formed in your eye." I really enjoyed the whole poem! |
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Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
" Big Sigh" There are no words, Only feelings. Thank you |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Logan: I'm sincerely impressed how words are your clay; your heart is your hands; and your mind is your vision which you mold the English language into such beautiful sculptures! You are quite an artisan. -MVS "If you think you know it all, you have a lot to learn." |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Fancy, then I achieved what I hoped, to let all feel it was personal, for it is, is it not?...gentle smile Very gentle smile, Sharon. What else is there but the memories, when it is all said and done?... ethome, once again, thank you so much for your comments and being here. I am most pleased that you enjoyed this...gentle smile Lisa, gentle smile, I hope they are good feelings..thank you for being here MVS, you are most kind and humble me with such words, Thank you for being here and for the read. Your kindness is most appreciated..gentle smile |
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