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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Reevaluate where does a spark go when it dies blue is the color of tears in eyes endure the fault in a mistake hours later still feel the ache what is the sound of pure hurt too loud in ears this concert I know the sound a heart makes in frozen silence as it breaks to truly know such sad places then tie and untie word laces hearts can break from more than love a rip and peal of you in short of no words to heal me this time reevaluate words my internal rhyme "...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
frozen heart breaking terrible sound to my ears reevaluate |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I know the sound a heart makes in frozen silence as it breaks to truly know such sad places then tie and untie word laces Lady... you just keep impressing me and breaking my heart at the same time... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
then tie and untie word laces wow...great lines, good poem *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! Cpat, selected the exact same lines that stood out to me, as well. They're just awesome and a beautiful focal point for the poem. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
just had to read this again... and I still say wow! |
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