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0 posted 2001-06-21 01:24 PM


Wherein Lies the Love

Betwixt, between
mirror’s sheen
somewhere in
starshine’s moonbeam

     Does therein lie the love?

In babe’s heartbeat
in scotch glass neat
somewhere in
love letters sweet

          Does therein lie the love?

In rosebud lips
or in draught sipped
somewhere in
a beloved’s fingertips

               Does therein lie the love?

Are you heaven bent
to see love lent
somewhere in
a room for rent

                    Does therein lie the love?

If you be but true
to the love close to you,
therein lies the love.

If you chase the fears
and not cause the tears
therein lies the love.

If you see past the haze
of lust’s gray craze
therein lies the love.

If you looked into my soul
and became one with me, whole,
therein lies the love.

And when death’s door beckons
and the day comes to reckon

therein

lies the Love.


21 July 2000
©Karilea Rilling Jungel

© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-06-21 01:31 PM


Amen.
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2 posted 2001-06-21 02:07 PM


yep....
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3 posted 2001-06-21 05:34 PM


And therein lies much wisdom.  You speak well.

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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4 posted 2001-06-22 08:38 AM


Kari dearest heart, within YOU lies the love. You have a wonderful way of writing beauty love, and this is utterly beautiful.
I love it, you know I do, it's fabulous dearest it really is.

Wonderful work excellent writing
Take care
love as always
Puck
      

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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