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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-21 03:48 PM



In the circles
Of my spaghetti –o’s
I find feelings for you

Sauce covered
Sliding Silently
Into a black hole you created

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-06-21 03:59 PM


I'm, uh, um, honored.  

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2 posted 2001-06-21 04:02 PM


(Chuckling) Well that darned blood pressure machine just made me laugh...and while I new what it was... I couldn't help myself. Must be my hillbilly upbringing showing...
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-06-22 06:21 AM


A chuckle a day won't keep the doctor away, but it can't hurt

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4 posted 2001-06-22 07:41 PM


CPatHair~
LOL !
Delightful !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-06-22 07:43 PM


Cpat-
   LOL...too cute!  
   ok...now i'm hungry! lol

   ~vicky

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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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6 posted 2001-06-22 11:12 PM


this is quite tasty!  
Sunshine
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7 posted 2001-06-22 11:17 PM


happy food causes most poets to spout poetic...

you've seen the SPAM and VIENNA SAUSAGE poems....

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8 posted 2001-06-22 11:39 PM


hehe   I can just picture someone sitting there, pondering over their spaghetti-o's!  Too funny  
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9 posted 2001-06-23 12:48 PM


LOL

Connie

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10 posted 2001-06-23 01:12 AM


very cute!

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11 posted 2001-06-23 01:29 AM


I had sworn off spaghetti-o's but I just may have to indulge again  
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12 posted 2001-06-23 01:58 PM


Well, Ron, this definitely allowed me to get the top back on my
sphygmomanometer

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