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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As I awaken The sweet scent of you lingers And I remember Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
was it silk that felt warm as your touch of touch, nay it was your lips, thus |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I've been there! It hits hard as can be sometimes. A great one here!  Sauni Sauni :) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lady ~ it was silken skin soft, moist lips that sparked the fire that consumed my love Saunni ~ Your first visit to my work, I think. Thank you. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Scent from fingers sweet, that touched my heart, through and through, memories of you Lovely thoughts. Well done. Poeminister |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
recalling the sighs that fell in last night's loving ~hunger for tonight ~SEA If I let you into my heart..... |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Enjoyed your poem, Interloper, and the comments! *smiles* ~Tier |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Oh well, WOW...that's a nice one. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I love the past and present tense of this flow and the way you wove it together in such short lines...Well done! Kathleen Blake |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Poeminister ~ How I remember your fingers curling my hair wonderful prelude SEA ~ tonight we will meet an encore of last we met you will remember Tiersdin ~ Thank you *sigh* Titia ~ Thank you sweet lady Colleen ~ Thanks for the wonderful comment Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Beautiful.... Lauren~ *** Nothing Beautiful In This World |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I will remember this love too sweet to forget come, love me again ~SEA |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
Hmmmm Let thy moon arise. William Blake [This message has been edited by lunatic (edited 06-04-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Greeneyes ~ Thank you, Lauren SEA ~ You'll never forget that I promise you my love you can count the ways lunatic ~ Same to ya Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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SilentSongs Junior Member
since 2001-05-31
Posts 43Mist of Time |
Memory fine razor sword of two shining blades calls it doth cut both ways "The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Silent Songs ~ Oh Excalibur finely honed on both edges comes to hand nicely Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Stunning, nothing else needed saying..wonderful...gentle smile |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
leaving you right now no sorrow in our parting more there is to be |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Logan ~ WOW! A stunning reply Deepest thanks.1slick_lady ~ My heart cries for you parting brings me much sorrow I live for your touch Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
beautiful my friend!!  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
counting the ways, Love slowly, as to not miss one relishing each sigh ~SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
opps...sorry computer is being kinda spooky right now [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 06-05-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Watersign6 ~ If half as beautiful as your comments, then I am satisfied Sea ~ We start with kisses blend in soft, warm caresses top with ecstasy Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Beautiful Thanks Connie |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...I remember... as the lingering sweet sense of you awakens me; nevermore to be only me in my memory!!!... I love the simplicity!!! Fancy |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I will add only that I ejoyed a great deal |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Zinsser ~ Thanks for digging this up from the archives I appreciate your time for the read.Fancy ~ Thanks for the fine verse and comment. And, yes, I have been called simple before Ron ~ Thanks for the read my friend. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very soft and beautiful Liz |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Elizabeth ~ Thank you for the read. I think this is your first time to visit my work. Welcome Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
Oh, wonderful. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Awakened by your scent I remembered the garlic from my spaghetti-O's Love this poem Interloper... brought back some very sensual and wonderful memories... still not over your blood pressure poem though... damn that just struck me as funny.. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Romantic remnants, Perfumed pillow passion's past, Lost Love's lust leavings |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
What a simple yet beautiful way of portraying that familiar feeling. Well done |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
mother smelled pillows when asked why she did such things "to remember him" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
BrightStar ~ Thank you Ron ~ Grinning ... RSWells ~ Wow, triple alliteration. I must try that. Thanx for the inspiration SmittenKitten ~ Thank you Sunshine ~ Thank you for the warm comment Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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