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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-06-23 04:35 PM


I'm feeling the same way at the moment, today.

Going to ............
Virginia Salter

my brain is a sponge
no
not that it soaks up everything fluid
no
more like the lifeless skeletal remains
passively at rest

drying
as something is pulling on it
drawing from it
anything useful
leaving it without kinetic energy
the kinetic energy of life

ah
it is that marauder
Sleep
wringing from it
all fluid thought
bringing dehydration
to its memory

little is left now
mini amounts
of tho...t
noth....
here

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

© June 30,  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-06-23 04:40 PM


LOL...thanks for sharing the ZZZZ's....
sodpossom
Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723
N.C
2 posted 2001-06-23 04:43 PM


Very well done and enjoyable!
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