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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Watching the rainbow Of colored light reflect Off the propeller tip That circles in arcs too Fast for the eye as it Holds aloft the lives Of all contained inside I can see below the Patchwork fields and Irregular forest which Like a giant jigsaw puzzle Make up the miles I travel. Lives lost in distance, Untouched, By the high passing shadow And faint buzz Proceed with day to day Living or death And I am suspended… Twenty thousand feet Overhead… Like an unaware angel That peeks down But is unable to effect Even its own haloed Desires. Lost in the hazy horizons Offered from these chilled Heights… I sense the rainbow of colors Reflected off the tip Of my spinning thoughts. As they circle in arcs too fast For the emotions inside. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
You have touched on those ineffectual feelings very well.... |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Lost in the hazy horizons Offered from these chilled Heights… I sense the rainbow of colors Reflected off the tip Of my spinning thoughts. As they circle in arcs too fast For the emotions inside. beautiful images "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Methinks you have outdone yourself my friend. BRAVO! AUTHOR! |
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