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Luna - Double Villanelle
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Luna - Double Villanelle |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Here's one from the Poetry Workshop. The assignment was to write two different poems, which can be read as one when you put them next to each other. Enjoy.  Full moon, your magic light shines down on me, ~~ Your firmaments compose the poetry, Your silver spell a cherished memory, ~~ Alike the Northern Light enchanting me, Illuminating beams; sweet mystery. ~~ You are this poet's utmost fantasy. You bring my spirit utter ecstasy, ~~ My Luna: temptress, waiting patiently, Delightful light of perfect harmony, ~~ Bereaving lonely hearts of sanity, Full moon, your magic light shines down on me. ~~ Your firmaments compose the poetry. You calm my storms till I feel heavenly, ~~ As stars sing me a nightly symphony, Your touch is like a lover's hand on me, ~~ Evoking images romantic'lly, Illuminating beams; sweet mystery. ~~ You are this poet's utmost fantasy. Seductive flirt with my reality, ~~ A moonlit flight throughout felicity, You chain my heart; bequeathing liberty, ~~ Restoring hope in love and honesty, Full moon, your magic light shines down on me. ~~ Your firmaments compose the poetry. Alluring dreams into conspiracy, ~~ While lovers fall into your lunacy, Of moon lit images illusory, ~~ Creating visions of false destiny, Illuminating beams; sweet mystery. ~~ You are this poet's utmost fantasy. A silver frail note flutters playfully, ~~ Alike a whisper from infinity, Charming the stars into a melody, ~~ Enticement into sweet serenity, Full moon, your magic light shines down on me, ~~ Your firmaments compose the poetry, Illuminating beams; sweet mystery. ~~ You are this poet's utmost fantasy. Munda |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well done...clever writing! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
This is the first double villanelle i've ever seen. You did a wonderful job with these. My compliments. PM |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
 Glad to see you again Munda Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Feel free to use the pictures on my website. [URL=http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100 ]htt [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (edited 06-18-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - this is amazing, and so lovely and whimsical. Pat yourself on the back, Munda, you should be very proud of this! You make it look easy, but, I know how difficult it is! Take care, Melissa~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
NOBODY knows how hard this really is! Munda, this is a masterful piece....a thousand BRAVOS to you!!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Munda~ You simply do not grace us often enough with your talent ! ! Now ... this poet begs for MORE ! My goodness ... THREE for the price of one ! Such a deal ! Lovely, lovely, lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
VERY IMPRESSIVE!!!!!!  All writing comes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and not to contradict the deer? but I DO TOO KNOW HOW HARD THIS IS....wowser...very, very impressive...I read it together, then each alone and together again...amazing! Munda...you have a new fan! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Munda..this is OUTSTANDING.... not just because of the talent and difficulty..but also because of how beautiful the end result is... this is a joy to read aloud and a pleasure to the minds eye in all the lovely imagery. very cool write.. and very nice to see your name here... more please? |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Hope you got an "A" for the assignment |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a true example of the poetic craft. . . just amazing. . . I wish I could do this. . . marvelous. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I thank you all for your kind words. Your replies are highly appreciated. |
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