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Storm Warning
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Storm Warning |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
In runnels, Trickling dripping Channels Awakened to possible Flow. Soundings Of rough grain shingled Resistance fill ears And head in this Down poured storm Chaotic ballet Of crazy thoughts Bouncing hailstone hard Add staccato rhythm To floods Released No lightening flashed Insight, but thunder Begins deep inside |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Wonderful use of some old words....runnels....chaotic.....staccato.... they clip right along! Like this, I do! |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Hope you felt better in this secret storm's passing. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
No lightening flashed Insight, but thunder Begins deep inside That was my favorite part, but it was all great. Very interesting. "...if you want love you must be love.." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Written with acumen my friend  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Chaotic ballet Of crazy thoughts Bouncing hailstone hard Add staccato rhythm To floods Released ========================= this is very cool... great use of vocabulary and imagery. unique and clever writing. well done she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
A grim warning sign. Nicely done. BTTT with this one. |
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