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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-06-21 01:59 PM




tracings

finger tracings
‘long your inner arm
disarm

even ‘tho
it is my finger
upon your arm

it is my
blush
warming

thoughts
swarming

your glance

pleased


write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

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1 posted 2001-06-21 02:02 PM


nicely sensual...and filled with ints of more...

Enjoyed

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2 posted 2001-06-21 02:10 PM


And then ... ?  Whoa, what just one look will do.  How can one practice that?

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3 posted 2001-06-21 04:59 PM


read this again..and I think I am going to take art classes...


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4 posted 2001-06-21 05:29 PM


I'm pleased.   Nice!

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the human mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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