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Poet's Senryu
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Poet's Senryu |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Poet’s Senryu trumpet thee thy conch! Tritons take heed, come hither beaches invaded dwell not by sun, sea uncompromising not we trumpet now thy conch! confrontation falls conclusions come from thy wit potency from pens |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, A tripple home run. *L* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
with each wave of words her pen does easily flow beauty from her heart  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Ooooh now these are awesome Take care, Melissa~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Now "these" are definately worth trumpeting about! Much enjoyed this lovely trio Karilea! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oops, I almost missed this. I should be conched on the noggin. Wonderful write. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
The words in this strike rapidly and powerfully, how do you do that? On the surface, they look like just words, yet when you string them, they become pearls or perhaps diamonds! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
These made me think of "Lord of the Flies"...the poet's conch brings the muses together... wonderful write. [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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