Open Poetry #14 |
I Still Think Of You |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Time will heal or so they say It doesn't matter anyway My memory is strong As I now carry on And do what's expected of me Although I grieve in ebbs and flows My love for you will continue to grow Taken away before your time My heart becomes lost as it does pine How my heart lost its way When you were taken away The wounds still remain As I vividly remember your pain How precious you were And how deeply loved I now look up to the heavens above The brightest star that shines on me Is you looking down so tenderly You watch my life as it unfolds And I hope you'd be proud of me Here in my heart is where you now reside Your kind face I so often see My newfound love of writing Began long after you died Another way to vent my grief Another way for me to cry With the help of special people Who encourage me as I write I feel a much better person As I follow my guiding light Suetang |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Suetang, what a lovely bittersweet outpouring of words that touch the heart. May the guiding light of all the stars put stardust in your soul today...gentle smile |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: So poignant and tender! I love your writing. I've been gone for two weeks and just got back on site, so I'm way behind on reading. Your poem is a beautiful way to begin catching up. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...the brightest star that shines down on me is you looking down so tenderly...in your sea of grief and pain, what a warm and reassuring heartfelt belief...hold onto this until you shine as your own bright star... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your lovely words, they mean so much to me. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
So loving, tender and sad, my friend. Please continue to grace us with your wonderful writing. (((hugs))) Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
What better way to understand ourselves and the world...than to write and read of it? Enjoyed the words Sue |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sue, a charmingly haunting cry....I am so very glad you have found your pen, your pad, and your home.... |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
This is very tender and beautiful. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I'm a bit overwhelmed at the response to this but I am so very grateful to all of you who take the time to read my work, it inspires me to keep on writing. Thank you all so very much.......Sue Suetang |
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