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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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0 posted 2001-06-22 05:10 PM


Acquiesce, Not

censorship and time kept
me from expressions of admit

when I find it most compelling
to line by line hit

myself and flail open old wounds
that only rip when you tear

while I calmly and decidedly can
pick off the scabs myself, there,

better to scar you with

and it comes to wit, then, from
long ago the switch of the mind

when first I read that I would find
no promises in a rose garden

the recall of same wonders if I had
triggered in my brain shard a then

of now

somehow

but they won’t let a mirror near
that I might see a little more clear

but instead, choose to face
my embrace

with minds found kind, indeed
planting new seeds

of hope

and what tears shed, then this day
that would leave flowers in your way

though a rose garden never promised,
was I

you shall never hear me acquiesce in
sigh


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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2001-06-22 05:19 PM


beautiful in all ways...

this is a keeper for sure...


RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

2 posted 2001-06-22 05:22 PM


Decaflame....Strong...yet pleading. Or so it seems. Interesting. Bob
Nathaniel Shain
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since 2001-06-03
Posts 35

3 posted 2001-06-22 05:23 PM


Beautiful, yes, but so very sad.

Nathaniel

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
4 posted 2001-06-22 05:59 PM


Oh this really reached out to me.

Sad   as it may be, it's beautiful  

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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