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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-06-21 08:22 AM



Still water runs deep,
Or so the old saying goes.

I remembered emerald green pools
Reflecting tree line and sky
As I glided by silently
Leaving only a disappearing
Vee behind and thought…
Once again of the depths
I had traversed
In your eyes.

Still water run deep they say
And I am running still
From yours.

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Decaflame
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1 posted 2001-06-21 08:26 AM


This is quite wonderful, though sad....emerald visions everywhere....


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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2001-06-21 09:07 AM


Well, it's good to know I'm good for something Well writ my friend.
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with you
3 posted 2001-06-21 09:23 AM


"And I am running still
From yours."

know this feeling very well  
I liked this very much

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4 posted 2001-06-21 09:48 AM


very mournful, but poetic indeed, touches the heart of the reader
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5 posted 2001-06-22 11:03 AM


Beautiful *sigh*
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6 posted 2001-06-22 01:52 PM


...quite thought provoking!!!
Fancy

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7 posted 2001-06-22 02:05 PM


Deca, Thank You! But sadness often accompanies the struggle we have..and even it has a beauty and depth

Interloper... we know your good for several things... inspiration is ceratinly one... some of the others I'll not mention in mixed company..( grinning)


Sea. Thank You glad you liked.

Vas. We are always looking to touch the heart and if it did that, then what better compliment could one give. Thanks

Bright Star  thank you.. so glad you liked!

Fancy: Now I didn't mean to provoke anyone..(laughing)

Thanks for your nice comment


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