Open Poetry #14 |
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Compassion |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Compassion By: Noah Eaton 6/9/01 When your tears don’t seem to sparkle And the world seems it has stopped revolving Your translucent heart surrenders every smile And through your eyes no color can be seen And when all your sobbing is interrupted By the sound of a silent brook beginning to babble And you look at yourself down on the tittering water To see a silhouette wrap a warm arm around you as you moan And hearing that whisper that seems to scream deep down inside How it touches your face, comparing such tears to those you cry Such that warm smile it wears, suffusing into your eyes A palpable mirage of the spirit you are, hugging you in it’s arms with a sigh And how your tears once more reflect the sunlight And your transparent heart gracefully fondles all your relieves And a rainbow retraces from it’s gray grave, agog in multitudinous greetings Hence you know you’re not alone, and through the eyes of pity you are always seen I am this silhouette, this silhouette is your friend I’m always here if you need me, there is someone here who cares for you Embrace my soul-stretched hug, I am here to share your tears You’ve been there for me, just as I will be here too… |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Noah, this is so lovely, and, well, compassionate. Your heart shines through, as always. Sandra |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, Those who have you to turn too are luckier than they realize ![]() ![]() |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
errrrr ![]() ![]() ![]() TaraB [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice piece Noah... almost missed it.. glad I didn't! |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
..."embrace my soul-stretched hug"... what a marvelous line... What a Hug... Fancy |
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