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cottage
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since 2001-06-21
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0 posted 2001-06-21 06:28 AM


She's Standing There
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Fortunate as I am
to have her as my destiny
She's real and she feels
in every part of me
What more can I hope for
she's an absolute God-send
I pledge and I swear
that this love is her eternity

Moving as I am
I reign and I succeed
Proud as I tower
over mankind's humanity
All else is trivial
only the grip to power matters
I move and I push
but have I not forgotten
that she still stands waiting

Defeated as I am
I've lost and I resent
all that's reaped from me
thru' the burning of fortune's clutch
Weak...angry!
I need no sympathy
yet I wish and I peep
for someone standing somewhere
Was it not my illusion
to see she's really there!

Stubborn as I am
with regained and presumed
wealth and consciousness
God must have realized
He owes me healing and back payment
Merciless as i go, with time and with love
I lift my head sometimes
and wonder if I still
need her standing there?

Awakened as I am
When she vows her forgiveness
for all passion lost and love changes
I know what she meant  
when she confessed her losing sense
of trust, of faith in me
It then dawned upon me
how beautiful she really is
when she promises she will
forever walk with me

I suddenly ask myself
when will I stop hiding
and what do I deserve
to have her always
standing there for me

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-06-21 06:38 AM


Welcome to Passions!  Please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Marsha
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2 posted 2001-06-21 06:39 AM


Welcome to Passions, and what a fabulous debut. This is wonderful, it truly is I like this muchly
Take care
love as always
Mushy
    

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2001-06-22 09:36 AM


Interesting stages in this... must have missed the opportunity to welcome you when this was posted..so welcome!!
hope to see more of your work

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-06-22 01:55 PM




She's standing there.....
and what a comfort that she is

Welcome to Passions......I hope you would enjoy it here.

Thank you
*********************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Fancy
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 189
TN/USA
5 posted 2001-06-22 01:59 PM


...fascinating to follow the mood changes tucked in the beauty of words...
Fancy

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13
Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted
6 posted 2001-06-22 05:39 PM


Yeah...mood swings like mine sometimes.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

athena4
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since 2000-12-10
Posts 622

7 posted 2001-06-22 07:46 PM


An eloquent and deeply beautiful write.  It touches the soul, and makes the heart dance.
Welcome to Passions!
          Elise

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