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Get a Life...Hers is Taken
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Get a Life...Hers is Taken |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Get a Life…Hers is Taken You have the combination so does she may as well be symbolic hers doesn’t work for yours, the master resets the code each time she finds the strength forms a plan eases her way beyond your grasp don’t you have something better to do like getting your own life You blame it on outside interference must be someone feeding her these thoughts waiting in the shadows to snatch from you her love news flash you need no help in driving her away your agenda’s been long defined all she asks, all she seeks is her own life simply released back to her [This message has been edited by JLR (edited 06-21-2001).] |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
..."news flash"... I love it!!! How appropriately placed! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
straightforward and honest message here...  "This rose has seen red, I have been blue |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
To the point and eloquent in its conveyance of thought... loved the last stanza.. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Good The Flow... The feeling of being trapped The other not understanding How much energy it takes to once again make a plan Very Good! Thanks Connie |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Ditto all the above! *hugs & smiles* ~Tier |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very well said, I like it, I like it! |
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