Open Poetry #14 |
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and ethome said |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
and ethome said ‘So write about the calmness’ since that is where you are and I recognized the wisdom in simplicity but I, being me…thought ‘This calm will never last’ best I sit and wait for angst’s return write what I know best yet here I remain in cool shades of gray the slightest sunshine overhead remembering, now writing upon the words that ethome said resigned to the quiet gift of calm a summer’s day visited anew tranquility holds a certain inspiration it just takes some getting used to |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and I recognized the wisdom in simplicity ================================ tranquility holds a certain inspiration it just takes some getting used to ================================= yes....he does speak with much wisdom doesnt he... love this soft spoken inspire... and those last two lines... your own wisdom is showing ![]() great writing here JLR I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is a good advice, it's funny when I'm calm(very rare), I'm wondering if something bad is going to happen ![]() |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
He IS wise, and this is delicate and quite simply well put.... so we thank you, and he, for this little treasure of calm. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to the light of day and bless the inspiration of your "coming out," et. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Ethome said that, wouldn't surprise me, Glad that you were at hand to document these pearls of wisdom. Great write. "Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett |
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Waseem Cheema Member
since 2001-03-16
Posts 369Pakistan |
JLR it is very nice...but little bit confusing for me...lolo |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh i felt the anxiety ooze toward tranquility in this one o yuh |
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