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JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

0 posted 2001-06-21 12:36 PM

and ethome said

‘So write about the calmness’
since that is where you are
and I recognized
the wisdom in simplicity

but I, being me…thought
‘This calm will never last’
best I sit and wait for angst’s return
write what I know best

yet here I remain in cool shades of gray
the slightest sunshine overhead
remembering, now writing upon
the words that ethome said

resigned to the quiet gift of calm
a summer’s day visited anew
tranquility holds a certain inspiration
it just takes some getting used to

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-06-21 12:41 PM

and I recognized
the wisdom in simplicity
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tranquility holds a certain inspiration
it just takes some getting used to
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yes....he does speak with much wisdom doesnt he...
love this soft spoken inspire...
and those last two lines...
your own wisdom is showing

great writing here JLR

I'm going crazy, I'm losing sleep.
I'm in too far, I'm in way too deep over you.
You'll always be the one.
You were the first, you'll be the last.

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2001-06-21 01:51 PM

This is a good advice, it's funny when I'm calm(very rare), I'm wondering if something bad is going to happen

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

3 posted 2001-06-21 01:55 PM

He IS wise, and this is delicate and quite simply well put....

so we thank you, and he, for this little treasure

of calm.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-21 01:56 PM

Welcome to the light of day and bless the inspiration of your "coming out," et.

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2001-06-21 02:07 PM

Ethome said that, wouldn't surprise me, Glad that you were at hand to document these pearls of wisdom. Great write.

"Build a man a fire, he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire and he'll be warm for the rest of his life". Terry Pratchett

Waseem Cheema
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since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

6 posted 2001-06-21 03:22 PM

JLR it is very nice...but little bit confusing for me...lolo

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
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7 posted 2001-06-21 03:26 PM

o yuh i felt the anxiety ooze toward tranquility in this one o yuh

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