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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-06-18 02:14 PM

Open
Open your eyes,
Let me fall through them
To your heart,
And there
Carve out a place
For myself.

Open your arms,
So that I might
Wrap you in mine
And stop this shaking.

Open your mouth,
And put your lips on mine,
Breathing hope
Into my soul.

Open your life,
So I can enter
Treading softly,
Careful not to tramp
On tender tomorrows.

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

1 posted 2001-06-18 02:23 PM

these words (nice choices) make me feel. youve done an awesome job of allowing the reader to take a journey into......
love it!!!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-06-18 02:24 PM

The first word that came to mind was "wow..." the second? "FOREPLAY"

Obviously I enjoyed this VERY VERY much!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-06-18 02:43 PM

I love this plea. Have felt this way before.
well writ my friend.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-18 06:52 PM

ah yes. . . I needed this tonight. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

5 posted 2001-06-18 08:09 PM

absolutely beautiful, Captain!

*smiles*

~Tier

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

6 posted 2001-06-18 08:27 PM

Breathing Hope into my soul.....
very good

Connie

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-06-18 09:08 PM

Wow....

that's all....

just

wow....

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

8 posted 2001-06-20 10:38 PM

Cpat Hair,

OOOOhhh I reallyyy like this!!! It's simply beautiful

I'm sooo glad I found it

TaraB

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

9 posted 2001-06-21 01:44 AM

...AWESOME...
you've opened up for me a desire to "open up"!!! Thank you!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2001-06-21 02:10 AM

This is fantastic, I find that I'm looking out for you

Maree

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

11 posted 2001-06-21 02:27 AM

Now "Open" is a word I want to remember

whew!

~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

12 posted 2001-06-21 07:48 AM

Beautiful and inspirational write - I've think we've all felt this way at one time or another.

Well done.
Michael

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

13 posted 2001-06-21 08:10 AM

Thanks to everyone for their nice comments... I have enjoyed poetry from all of you and find this a very nice place to read and share..

Thanks Again!

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2001-06-21 10:59 AM

enjoy

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

15 posted 2001-06-21 02:30 PM

Tender, intimate and softly inviting.

Corinne

Waseem Cheema
Member

since 2001-03-16

Posts 369
Pakistan

16 posted 2001-06-21 03:04 PM

Sir Excellent write......Very nice call ..OPEN

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

17 posted 2001-06-21 03:16 PM

Soft and sensual tender tomorrow, lovely thoughts!

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