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Open Poetry #14

Brown Eyes...Senryu

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-06-21 01:10 PM

Caramel oeillade
pulls me to seduction's halse
resistance: futile

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-21-2001).]

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-06-21 01:12 PM

Poeminister! Marvelous!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-21 01:16 PM

Well I certainly am glad to see Brown eyes get some attention on here... all that Emerald stuff yesterday was starting to make me think about colored contacts..

(grinning)

Very nicely done...and love the use of language here...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-06-21 01:20 PM

I wish I had your dictionary ... halse?
Lovely senryu.

eyes like brown sugar
soft, sweet and habit forming
irresistible

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

4 posted 2001-06-21 01:40 PM

With all the different eye colors one can acquire nowadays, is nice someone appreciated brown eyes. Lovely!

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

5 posted 2001-06-21 01:58 PM

Brown eyes, my personal favorite

Wonderful!

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-06-21 04:12 PM

*...blink...blink...blink...*
brown eyes rule

loved this

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2001-06-21 05:09 PM

enjoy

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