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Open Poetry #14

poem - not titled

PoemCrazy
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since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

0 posted 2001-06-20 05:37 PM

"you wouldn't know truth, sir,
if it bit you on the..."

behind

a word,
lies motivation,
(what's your)
intention.

speak carefully,
listen carefuller.

do you know what I means?

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this is right out of the looneybin...tom

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2001-06-20 08:00 PM

I like your way with words and replying to your work just means I get to read your crazy 'critique' phrase!

PoemCrazy
Member

since 2000-11-30

Posts 159

2 posted 2001-06-20 11:45 PM

Hi!

thanks Ms. deVine,
the quote snuck into my head from somewhere today, and the rest, i pulled out of my...um...head.

whaddaya mean, crazy?
oh, that...tom

forevernbluejeans
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 76

3 posted 2001-06-21 12:39 PM

Just where can I find a "looney bin" cuz it sure makes for some great poetry

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-06-21 12:50 PM

Looniness becomes you!

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