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I Seek You
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I Seek You |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Sadly, sentimental me, misses an icon on my screen. A tiny blinking envelope-- message from--a spark of hope. I had to turn the "uh-ohs" down. It startled me to hear the sound. Now my speaker's on again. I miss the "uh-ohs" of my friend. I did not save the history. Conversations typed till three-- and on until the clock struck four as we typed and typed some more. And surprise as clock chimed five. (It took that long to say goodbye.) But oh it was a fine surprise to hear your voice and meet your eyes. Now a keyboard just won't do. I want to take in all of you. I want to smell your very scent... my time with you, to be...Well? SPENT.  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yeah...dont I know that feeling...waiting on the uh oh.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hehe I like this hon  Those darn uh-oh's! Maree |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... nicely done... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoying the play on words! |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yep..know that feeling all too well.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Now a keyboard just won't do. I want to take in all of you. I want to smell your very scent... my time with you, to be...Well? SPENT. ============================ "uh-ohs" and phone cards just dont cut it... long distance sucks.... *sigh* |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Sadly, sentimental me, misses an icon on my screen. A tiny blinking envelope-- message from--a spark of hope. ==================== and sentimental me too...... I really enjoyed and loved this alot..... Thank you for sharing it ******************************** It's only me.......only me |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Enjoyed this one muchly, O serene one... regards, sudhir "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...you have captured the thoughts and feelings of many in your wonderful display of words... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I used to wonder why they used the sound Uh-Oh on ICQ. Sadly I found out too late... very nicely penned, serenity.. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Celeste! That last vrese is filled with that powerful Acadian emotion....great words my dear poet lady....write on! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, excellently done. Sandra |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks to all! I had fun with this one! |
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