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Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

0 posted 2001-06-21 11:59 PM

Hair of childhood blond, turning to auburn tresses
Ready to question but of own mind addresses
Hiding what you knew, deep inside
Childhood friends walked beside
No one could see them, only you
Certainly not teachers at your school

A princess you were, Huck Finn too,
The many times you wore actress shoes
All the times you played the game
When always you knew you were not the same
You listened to a different drummers tune
Until you followed it all so soon

Sickness took many a thing
But in reality, you only did gain
You chased the will-o-wisp in your seek
Til finally, a mission you did keep
Thirty three years in our hearts
Always to stay until final part

Even then, “giving you a wink”
Still being around, if only in ink
Knowing the beliefs we always shared
Very apparent we always cared
This day is yours, even being apart
You always were a dear sweetheart

So happy birthday to you, dear love
You ever did, come push or shove
Always so proud of you, we be
Even at times that you did not see
If you continue to do as you have done
You will have earned a place within the sun.

Happy Birthday, Becka , from the heart

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

1 posted 2001-06-22 12:14 PM

...the more times I read this, the more it touches my heart..."to touch a heart is to change a life"...
Fancy

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2001-06-22 01:07 AM

Sweet One. I am sure that this Birthday wish will be well received. It is beautifully and fondly done.

((Hugs)) I think I have some reading to catch up on.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2001-06-22 04:52 AM

A lovely birthday poem for your daughter, and thank you for sharing it with us, all the love therein shines as the brightest star Logan, and Happy Birthday Becka!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-22 06:41 AM

Just plain beautiful sentiment and work

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-06-22 07:02 AM

Logan~
*Hugs* from the gentle heart of this mother -
to the gentle heart of a father.

Loveliest of reminiscent memories, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

6 posted 2001-06-22 07:06 AM

very loving poem and It put a smile on my face when I read it so I know your daughter will love it very much and I hope she has a good birthday

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2001-06-22 09:32 AM

For some reason this really brings tears to me. Beautiful. Sad to me, though.
Sandra

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

8 posted 2001-06-22 09:25 PM

Logan, your daughter has become an Angel and you have shared her and her beautiful memory with all of us. Thank you so very much. Hugs, ME

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2001-06-22 09:28 PM

Logan, your daughter is lucky indeed to be thought of in such way. Beautiful testament of your love for her. I hope she has a very Happy Birthday! Lovely work.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

10 posted 2001-06-23 07:08 PM

you show how much you care o yuh

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

11 posted 2001-06-23 07:59 PM

A beautiful write Logan...filled with all
the memories that keep us close in heart to
our children...Her lovliness shines as does
the love you hold for her, thank you so much
for sharing both with all of us~

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

12 posted 2001-06-23 11:57 PM

Thank all of you wonderful people for sharing this birthday with me. My children are all very special to me and your kind thoughts and all your wishes will stay with me in that special place I keep dear. Ahh, this time, I, gentle smile, don't have the words to thank you adequately, so I will just say Thank You with hugs and love

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