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Open Poetry #14

Know What I Mean?

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2001-06-20 03:20 PM

"Know What I Mean?"

Sometimes
when I write
the words upon
the screen
the meaning
the placement
sometimes
doesn’t say
what I mean
I try to say
all the right things
but not being
good at this
what you read
just might
not be
what I mean.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2001-06-20 03:25 PM

Yep...sometimes it flows on to the paper smoothly and easily and other times it is just a little bit frustrating to express the thoughts...James

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-06-20 03:42 PM

You really shouldn't worry about that! Interpretation is half the art of poetry methinks! Good to see you post again...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-06-20 03:54 PM

You get your points across quite well

forevernbluejeans
Member

since 2001-04-05

Posts 76

4 posted 2001-06-21 12:54 PM

As long as YOU

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2001-06-21 08:19 AM

yep..thedarnwords often fail when strung together
to say exactly the things I wanted

and then.... I start again

Enjoyed!!

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

6 posted 2001-06-21 03:59 PM

Yuh just be yuh!

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