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Have A Good Day
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Have A Good Day |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Have a Good Day Anyone can say the words Anyone can sure, be heard But when your love says “have a good day, my sweet” That is when the moment comes That your heart begins to hum. Do you know the trick of turn That time when events are known That your soul is in his eyes And in your love he’s grown? That is when the moment comes That your heart begins to hum. Anyone can say the words Anyone can sure, be heard But when you say to your love “have a good day, my sweet” It is in that very moment That he has become complete. Before you go out the door Take up your love so fine Whisper “have a good day, my sweet” Leave your love on their mind. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It is the simple recognition of another..the well wishes meant with the heart that make all the difference.. Enjoyed |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
A few words said honestly can last beyond the moment. "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Excellent advice. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Have a good day! I mean it from a poet's point of view! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Do you know the trick of turn That time when events are known That your soul is in his eyes And in your love he’s grown? That is when the moment comes That your heart begins to hum. Anyone can say the words Anyone can sure, be heard But when you say to your love “have a good day, my sweet” It is in that very moment That he has become complete. ============================ exactly lady...exactly... OH..and Lady...have a good day  she said I dont know why you ever would lie to me |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh but I love those little "love prints" on my mind, uplifting poem this was and it liked me! ~*~ Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~ |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
One always has a good day if one gets to read your offerings. |
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