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Mote
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since 2000-05-24
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0 posted 2001-06-20 12:48 PM


We are the dawning
Spring-tide of passions blooming
Everflorid love

[This message has been edited by Mote (edited 06-20-2001).]

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VAS
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1 posted 2001-06-20 01:48 AM


yes, a lovely senryu, dawning at its best!
Titia Geertman
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2 posted 2001-06-20 01:58 AM


Very nicely written senryu, thanks

Titia

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Dark Angel
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3 posted 2001-06-20 02:39 AM


Lovely indeed  

Maree

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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-06-20 12:20 PM


dawn brings light slowly
the age of aquarious
has passed on to you

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

5 posted 2001-06-20 12:22 PM


swiftly comes the light
ever-present night be gone
daylight hears my song

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
6 posted 2001-06-20 01:00 PM


Nicely done!
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with you
7 posted 2001-06-20 02:37 PM


the tide brings you in
washing you upon my shore
as dawn lights the day

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