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Open Poetry #14

The Dawning......Senryu

Mote
Junior Member

since 2000-05-24

Posts 31

0 posted 2001-06-20 12:48 PM

We are the dawning
Spring-tide of passions blooming
Everflorid love

[This message has been edited by Mote (edited 06-20-2001).]

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

1 posted 2001-06-20 01:48 AM

yes, a lovely senryu, dawning at its best!

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-06-20 01:58 AM

Very nicely written senryu, thanks

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2001-06-20 02:39 AM

Lovely indeed

Maree

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-06-20 12:20 PM

dawn brings light slowly
the age of aquarious
has passed on to you

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

5 posted 2001-06-20 12:22 PM

swiftly comes the light
ever-present night be gone
daylight hears my song

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

6 posted 2001-06-20 01:00 PM

Nicely done!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2001-06-20 02:37 PM

the tide brings you in
washing you upon my shore
as dawn lights the day

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