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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-06-13 02:23 AM

The brocaded sky
a clinquant curtain of eyes
spills its gaze on us

On clouds together
amidst the starry weather
we lay in pleasures

Moon mist sprinkles down
spotlighting to the Heavens
our midnight actures....

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-06-13 07:41 AM

PoeMinister~
A glittering act for sure ! !
Enjoyed your thoughts in these well-crafted Senryu's.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2001-06-13 08:11 AM

treat to read are these wonderful senryus.
like them all.

Charisma

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-06-13 08:21 AM

Well crafted and wonderful reads... I enjoyed!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-06-13 03:52 PM

Marge, Charisma, & Decaflame--thank you all for your kind comments unto these.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-13 07:16 PM

now this paints a superb picture Poeminister. . .

excellent. . .

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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-06-13 07:41 PM

this is very, very original...I enjoyed the depth of these words.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

7 posted 2001-06-13 07:51 PM

That's a beauty.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-06-13 08:01 PM

love these.....sooooo beautiful.....your talent shines dear poet

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2001-06-13 08:59 PM

well, I had to go to dictionary.com, but I found the meaning of the two words I'd never seen before

yes, a lovely poem with vibrant, vivid images

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

10 posted 2001-06-13 09:22 PM

Very nicely done, Poeminister...I like these...

sp

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

[This message has been edited by snowpants (edited 06-13-2001).]

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

11 posted 2001-06-13 09:23 PM

enjoyed this very much my friend

Zinsser
Senior Member

since 2001-02-27

Posts 1641
Calif.

12 posted 2001-06-20 01:32 PM

Very Good
Thank You
Connie

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

13 posted 2001-06-20 01:35 PM

You know I love it, er, ah, them

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

14 posted 2001-06-20 02:28 PM

The brocaded sky
a clinquant curtain of eyes
spills its gaze on us
============================

WOW...amamzing imagery here...
and very cool vocabulary

"the brocaded sky"...I love that thought.

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

15 posted 2001-06-20 02:48 PM

Great write

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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