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Open Poetry #14
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pres56
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since 2001-06-09
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0 posted 2001-06-19 08:36 PM



The fire burns out of control
soon i will be burnt to the ground
She is so hot but dangerously beautiful
that i can't help but be drawn to the fire.

The fire, red hot with flickers of orange and yellow
wanted her yesterday and i'll need her tomorrow
She is killing me with every single flame
i am collecting every word that she says.

The flames are to hot for me
but the fire has me in her darkened spell
There can be no escape for she has my soul
as she pulls me down to the floor.

The fire is in me
she lives inside of me
We are now one
the fires.

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Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-06-19 08:49 PM


This one was HOT!!!  Left steam on my computer screen.....WOW!!!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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