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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-16 11:26 AM



Casual Corners Of The Heart

~*Marge Tindal*~

Rolling in the distant dust
of memories on the move
I search through casual corridors
finding sweet recall of you

Blue umbrella'd memories
canopy me with thoughts of you
Breezing through my heart
in casual searching of renew

A stroll of familiar passage
finds you waiting there
Suiting to perfection
the fragrance you still wear

On casual corners of the heart
I pause to reminisce
soft soft breezes blowing
memories of your kiss

Soft surround this memory
gentle stirring of the wind
Brings me close enough to touch
the heart of long ago friend

Pleasure mine in walk of time
across a moment of hungered need
I'll come again when I can stay
until the longing recedes


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-06-16 11:38 AM


each and every little part
speaks a moment to my heart...

loving it!

Hugging you!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-06-16 12:01 PM


Marge,
Such a romantic. Not quite frantic but close.
Lovely. *L*

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3 posted 2001-06-16 12:06 PM


Karilea~
To catch you waiting on a corner - is my pleasure.
Kiss or no kiss ! LOL !  

Seymour~
I plead guilty
of the charge
Frantic Romantic at large
THAT's Marge ! !
LOL !
You deserve a great big HUG !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Logan
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4 posted 2001-06-16 01:18 PM


Soft surround this memory
gentle stirring of the wind
Brings me close enough to touch
the heart of long ago friend

Ahh, Marge, gentle smile, you know you always touch my heart strings when you bring that melody of the breeze flowing through...very well done, again, my friend

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5 posted 2001-06-16 01:37 PM


Marge,

    To say this touched me, would be an understatement.
Absolutely beautiful......

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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6 posted 2001-06-16 02:05 PM


Logan~
To know you caught a memory
on soft cascade of breeze
Rests near-enough to perfect
in the heart of me !

AWhispersCaress~
A breeze that touches another is blown in pleasure.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~

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7 posted 2001-06-16 02:42 PM


Lovely!

Hugs,
Deb

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8 posted 2001-06-16 03:29 PM


BloomingRose~
Thank you.
It was a sweet one to stroll through my pen.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2001-06-18 06:18 PM


Margir girl this is awesome

Pleasure mine in walk of time
across a moment of hungered need
I'll come again when I can stay
until the longing recedes

Oh how beautiful is this, the flow the feel of it absolutely perfect love truly sister I love this

Can I take this one Margie girl please, I need it, honestly I do, and you know why.  

Wonderful writing love utterly wonderful. I would have been on here all day but the puter has been playing up.

Take care
Love and warm stuff
Mushy
      

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



ethome
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10 posted 2001-06-18 06:22 PM


Marge I love this title because of what it says in itself....What a great way to look at it!...love this......

                            "On casual corners of the heart
                                   I pause to reminisce
                                 soft soft breezes blowing
                                  memories of your kiss

                                Soft surround this memory
                                 gentle stirring of the wind
                             Brings me close enough to touch
                                the heart of long ago friend"

Write on dear poet lady!

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11 posted 2001-06-18 06:34 PM


Wonderful, Marge. Nobody does romance like you, do, lady!

Corinne

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12 posted 2001-06-18 06:35 PM


MarshaLove~
I would be very pleased to know it was yours !
Yes, I know the why ... and send *Hugs* of understanding !

ETHome~
I thank you.
As it often does, the title came first
and the rest tagged along for the ride.
*Hugs* to you.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2001-06-18 06:38 PM


CORINNE ! !
You been talking to my fella ?????  
Well .... we thank you !
LOL !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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14 posted 2001-06-19 12:36 PM


I need... NEEEED  some memories like this  
this is lovely Margie.. romantic and graceful.
Your poetry always sets such a wonderful mood...
Hallmark Cards and Harlequin Romance novels NEED you !!!
me

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15 posted 2001-06-19 12:43 PM


Soft Corners of Your Heart seems to me, you have nothing but softness in your words and memories. Beautiful image, also.

~A~

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"Soft surround this memory
gentle stirring of the wind
Brings me close enough to touch
the heart of long ago friend"



oh I do love this Marge  

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17 posted 2001-06-19 01:21 PM


Thank you for taking me to the gentle corners of your soul, I feel much warmer having been there, special lady.

~*~  Tell someone you love them today, as tomorrow may never come ~*~

Irie
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18 posted 2001-06-19 01:27 PM


I enjoyed these Casual Corners Marge!
Always better to have a memory than have had nothing at all,
well, most of the time anyway.  

Thanks for sharing....

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



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19 posted 2001-06-19 01:50 PM


Sometimes that longing seems to receed rather slowly, I appreciate your words.  Very nicely written.
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Deep in the heart
20 posted 2001-06-19 02:53 PM


memories recalled
through the mist of remember
longing once again

Marge Tindal
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21 posted 2001-06-19 08:45 PM


JanetMarie~
You're a sweetie !
These wonderful replies are quickly
endearing this piece to my heart.

AliceThruGlass~
Welcome to Passions !
Oh, I'm a 'softie' alright !

SEA~
Would have bet the farm on it !  

Mysteria~
Awwwww !
Thanks for being in my corner !

Irie~
Tender moments make the greatest memories !
I love them ALL !

Gemini~
Yeahhhhh !  I know that feeling well ...
I just keep strolling ...

InterLoper~

Once more I do long
To hear sweet memories song
Around the corner


Thank you ALL ~  *Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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