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RMW
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since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424


0 posted 2001-06-19 09:36 AM


...then I'll quit...promise...(this may be a re-post)...

Room

With simple things I packed the day;
Making space,
Uncertain why it works that way,
But knowing somewhere far from work
Where thought arrives in isolated blocks,
As though a group of box cars
Shut up tight,
I'd find a view.
Along the way I thought of you,
And thus transported, forgot to ask
If there was room
For baggage.

RMW

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2001-06-19 09:51 AM


always looking to bring along baggage....

you could learn from a hobo...

great!

Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-06-19 09:54 AM


ah... always baggage to carry with us, and always only so much room.. enjoyed RL...
VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2001-06-19 10:34 AM


don't we all always have baggage even when we think we've come empty handed and footloose

good one!

Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
4 posted 2001-06-19 11:39 AM


I think they call it Old Timer's  
Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
5 posted 2001-06-19 03:55 PM


Well, yes, but carry-on only!

*G*

Cor

Titia Geertman
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since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182
Netherlands
6 posted 2001-06-19 06:30 PM


Want to give you a for this.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

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