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thecraig
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since 2001-03-11
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0 posted 2001-06-18 02:57 PM



  I Take the Blame
yes I take the the blame
yes I take the game again;
So something is not right
so something is slightly wrong
must it all be put into song:
Is there someone else who takes ?
is there someone else who makes ?
Sense from all the mistakes;
Consequences are here along with a big wet tear ;
that I hide deep inside ,
quenching all the fear;
all mixed up
churning & wrenching
until the boiling over spills,
so the secrets separate the truths
& when it is all out;
& I have had my shout
I am here;
Through this muddling mess
I scramble quite distressed;
wrangling wrestling answers
from the woes of this weary world,
trying to put blunt
the bashful bumbling blur                          I Take the Blame
yes I take the the blame
yes I take the game again;

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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-06-18 03:53 PM


I thought I claimed "the blame" a long time ago!!! It was all my fault then and it's all my fault now! But if you insist, I'll let ya have a turn!   Cute one, here...and don't mind me--I'm crazy too yanno!
Sad Clown
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since 2001-06-20
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TN
2 posted 2001-06-21 11:30 PM


what a job taking the blame is.
I like this.

"As I stumble through this life, help me to create more laughter than tears."
Sad Clown's Prayer

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