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Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

0 posted 2001-06-20 02:13 PM

Learning more and more each day,
About exactly who I am.
Feeling so much for someone,
Surfaces the truth.

Life can be so rough,
So confusing in your own mind.
Awaiting just to hold you,
And feel reality within facades.

I believe in who you are,
Never known a person more true.
You give me so much to strive for,
You help me just to be.

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-20 02:19 PM

"Because of you there's a song in my heart."
Nice job. Write on.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 06-21-2001).]

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

2 posted 2001-06-20 02:41 PM

Good to see you again, Jenn! Never quit learning....too much out there we don't know!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2001-06-20 02:45 PM

ah..sounds like head over heels to me..

enjoyed the verse and the smile it gave me

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2001-06-20 02:51 PM

Enjoyed, Nice write.

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

5 posted 2001-06-20 05:16 PM

Thank you all. You're all so kind.

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-20 07:28 PM

quote:
Learning more and more each day,
About exactly who I am.
Feeling so much for someone,
Surfaces the truth.

and that's just how it should be. . . great job here!!

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

7 posted 2001-06-20 10:11 PM

Thanks Sven!! So sweet.

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2001-06-21 01:35 PM

Lovely poem!

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

9 posted 2001-06-21 02:02 PM

What a beautiful expression of your feelings for somebody, very touching. Brings back memories... sigh.... lol

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

10 posted 2001-06-21 02:48 PM

..."you help me just to be"...
this grabs me...lovely
Fancy

JLR
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since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

11 posted 2001-06-21 03:36 PM

The sweetest of loves...well done!

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

12 posted 2001-06-21 11:11 PM

Thanks so much all of you! So nice!

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill

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