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Placing his hand in hers
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Placing his hand in hers |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
The painful realization, when I held his hand but she, his heart and the only thing left to do was place his hand in hers where it belonged I would not hold him unfairly to what we'd become As, even I, saw her beauty but moreso, his smile when gazing upon her and heard him laugh that rich laughter I hadn't heard in oh so long now I would rather see him happy with her than struggling with me In love he is so beautiful And so I chose to love her for what she gave to him instead of what she took from me Not only to say the right thing in the right place, but far more difficult, to leave unsaid the wrong thing at the tempting moment. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you then, have the bigger heart... well done, Tovi... |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Bigger....I don't think so, probably just more weary. Thank you, Sunshine. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very well written compassion. |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...how hauntingly and painfully beautiful...oh that we all could have such a gracious attitude in loss... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done..and the thought and idea is one of selfless love.. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, then Tovi, gentle smile, you shut the door and then dropped the key. That takes more love than most will every possess... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh wow, this one was something. You have a huge heart, Tovi. Takes a lot of strength to do what you did. I admire you. All writing comes |
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