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pres56
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since 2001-06-09
Posts 28


0 posted 2001-06-18 09:48 PM



Whenever i felt like crying you
Came along and made me smile,
Whenever i hit a dead end
You came and comforted this poor child.
If it wasn't for you by now
  I would be six foot under,
You always put a smile in place of
The lightning and thunder.
So i thank you
You will always be in my heart,
You chased away my fears and
Helped me make a fresh start.
So Lynn wherever you go and whatever you’re doing,
I know without you my life would of ended up in ruin.
Even if it still does
I'll still have the memories of you,
I love you because of you,
Not just cos you pulled me through.


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Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
Posts 1370
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1 posted 2001-06-18 10:12 PM


What a beautiful tribute to your special person.  Thank you for sharing with us.  ME
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