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Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

0 posted 2001-06-18 04:20 PM

May you walk among the stars of morning
Eden waiting silent for the dawn,
ready to unravel without warning,
restless with the urge to be reborn.
Years of longing pale into beauty,
a never-realized dream unfolds.

Remember that the flow is not the stream.
In my heart you wear a crown of glory
so radiant that time must turn away.
The vision rises from the untold story
more lovely than what sees the light of day.
As you can never know just who your are,
so let my love become your eastern star,
and you my western sun rising.

Written in Celebration
of Love Discovered

For two special friends

Graphics: Destiny - Allposters.
Music: The Memory of Trees
Enya

"I am not now that which I have been."

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2001-06-18 04:21 PM

Beautiful.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-06-18 04:26 PM

Interloper: thank you. I'm not sure what happened to the music, but imagine Enya playing gently inthe background.

"I am not now that which I have been."

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-06-18 06:19 PM

Wonderful writing......

                          "In my heart you wear a crown of glory
                             so radiant that time must turn away.
                             The vision rises from the untold story
                          more lovely than what sees the light of day.
                           As you can never know just who your are,
                           so let my love become your eastern star,
                               and you my western sun rising."

Very poetic and well done!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-18 06:34 PM

this reads like a blessing. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

5 posted 2001-06-18 07:04 PM

ethome and Sven: thank you. Yes, it was meant to be a blessing. I don't ordinarily write love poetry so it felt a bit strange.

"I am not now that which I have been."

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-06-18 09:48 PM

Very nice. And you are certainly writing love poetry well, for someone who doesn't usually do it!
Sandra

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

7 posted 2001-06-18 09:54 PM

Sandra thank you for your kind comment.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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