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Parting Words
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
In parting… I would say little That has not been Said before. Too many feelings For words to paint Or for hearts to see All… Said before No justice done To things shared Is possible in Saying again All… Said before So I say nothing |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Stark....and cuts to the quick. Well done! |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
You are right about saying nothing. Why re-hash old feelings and words. Nicely done! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done, and, as I have come to expect, you bring fresh insight to our craft. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
A practice I could never master...yet respect greatly. Enjoyed. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, well done, succinct, yet painfulness comes through loud and clear. |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
There does come a time, doesn't there? My compliments. This has left me much to reflect upon. |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Very Good....that would be growth ... to be able to say nothing.... Thank You Connie |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...to say nothing, a feat I have not conquered...even when words are worn and weary...they scream from the heart for release...this is very good writing... |
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