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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-06-17 06:17 PM


Images of love are very evident
In the myriad of words I weave
My feelings are all laid out
As I wear my heart on my sleeve

I'm such a hopeless romantic
This is a fact I can't deny
As I paint a picture of lovers
Underneath a moonlit sky

The moon is like a beacon
Casting beams across the sand
As this pair of star-crossed lovers
Walk together hand in hand

The soothing sound of the waves
Is the only sound that can be heard
Warm feelings of love and yearning
From these two souls are now stirred

They lie and face each other
Bodies entwined in a passionate embrace
As around each others faces
Their fingers lightly trace

Lips now joined in anticipation
As sweet loving has now begun
In each others arms they'll still be
With the rising of the sun

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2001-06-17 06:56 PM


Sue..this is a beauty. Love your work as always. and? I'm here if ya need an ear too. Hugs.
Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
2 posted 2001-06-17 07:47 PM


Hi Suetang,

This is so beautiful, very well written, so very much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
3 posted 2001-06-17 10:03 PM


Serenity
As always it's so nice to hear from you and I hope that things are fine with you....Sue

Cerenity
Thank you for your kind words and I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this......Sue

Suetang

Zinsser
Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
4 posted 2001-06-18 09:34 AM


Beautiful... will look for more of your work
Thank You
  Connie

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
5 posted 2001-06-18 11:58 AM





Wow.........quite lovely.......and beautifully romantic.

Thank you for sharing such a sweet romance
******************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Fancy
Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189
TN/USA
6 posted 2001-06-18 02:07 PM


...from one hopeless romantic to another...your words paint a very vivid picture...lovely
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