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A martyr marvel
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A martyr marvel |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
Would you believe ..? the astonishing grief the hard beginings or fatal endings Which wrote my martyrdom Could you feel..? my attempts to uncover your veil to smell your charming violet or the bewitched fragnant Which increased my drunkness Would you see..? my searching ,like a bee to sip your ripe nectar to praise your heavenly sculptor Which resurrected my dead soul Could you hear..? my husky tear the unspeakable words the flammable needs Which all broke me so easily I hope you would I whish you could --------------------------- Thanks 4 having me here in this lovely forum and I'd like to thank my friend MyEnchanted_Melody for the invitation Bye [This message has been edited by Romeo (edited 06-19-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Romeo! This is a lovely and emotion-filled first post ... I hope to read more.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions Romeo! Great poem to start with...lots of emotional questions posed with a real yearning! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hello there, lovely poem. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! A nice thank-you to the poet that said "look here!" Please, check your e-mail for a special message! Karilea |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome! Glad you found your way here. I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Fancy Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 189TN/USA |
...what a treasure to be able to share such emotion.... |
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Romeo Junior Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 43 |
Kit McCallum thanks 4 the warm welcome ,I'm pleased to be here in such wondeful forum ========================== ethome I appreacite your lovely words in which I'm really proud of =========================== Titia Geertman Hi Titia and thanks for the complement ============================ Sunshine thanks 4 the replay Sunshine ============================== Poet deVine I'm glad too that your replay is here and thanks 4 the encourgement ============================ Fancy so thanks 4 sharing it with me =============================== everybody I really appreciate your replies and the warm welcome that I found in my 1st poem I wish all of u the best luck and thanks for pushing my stubborn pen to continue on...... have a pleasent day Romeo |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Hi Romeo....... Welcome to Passions, I'm glad that you came. Oh....boy! did I come too late  I certainly hope not.......... ============================= A martyr marvel.....indeed and what a marvelous martyr you have penned here..... A marvelous martyr forever drowned in the mysteries of his questions and to answer your questions, I'd say.... Yes.....I believe The astonishing grief The hard beginnings and the fatatl painful endings........ The words left abandoned..... unable to be contained to be expressed or to even be uttered Oh....look what you've done  Thank you *********************************** It's only me.......only me |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
yes, lots of emotion! welcome to PIP one question...my dictionary doesn't have: falmable could you enlighten me |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
welcome to passions. thisd wss an awesome first post If you only understood my pain then maybe you could learn to be my friend. Be there. My crying shoulder. The smiles. And the caring i need to survive. |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Awesome, indeed. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
welcome to Passions some great images here really loved the verse: Could you feel..? my attempts to uncover your veil to smell your charming violet or the bewitched fragnant Which increased my drunkness |
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