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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-06-17 10:31 PM


Here we sit upon the sand
Two lovers arms entwined
Such wonderful feelings we share
As our love becomes combined

Our gaze turns towards the heavens
To the diamond studded sky
As we search for constellations
Up above us way up high

We search for the Southern Cross
On the night's canvas we spy
As we witness a shooting star
As it arches across the sky

Holding hands we wish together
For a love to last all time
Then we walk along the sand
Guided by the moon's silvery shine

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-06-17 11:23 PM


SueTang~
This is oh, so lovely !
~*Marge*~

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2 posted 2001-06-17 11:37 PM


Lovely poem.  The moon and stars are such inspirations.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-06-18 12:25 PM


beautiful sue.. loved it

              ~Victoria~

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JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-06-18 06:33 AM


Very romantic to witness a shooting star together...James
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5 posted 2001-06-18 07:59 AM


lovely poem... nice imagery and filled with romance.. I enjoyed
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