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RSWells
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0 posted 2001-06-17 02:39 PM



I live not in a castle,
Have just modest attire,
Refuse to be a vassal
Nor grandiose aspire,
Money? Minute in passel,
Will never know retire,
There's freedom in such facile,
No budget for a liar.

Not mistaken for a czar,
Thank God not charged per poem,
Have no shiny jaguar car
(my ride didn't make it home)
I've the nightlife of the stars,
Under which I'm free to roam,
In my words there's no fumar,
For in truth I'm quite at home.

Can remember all I've said,
Not just words you want to hear,
I don't have to turn my head
In the passing of the mirror,
My co-workers often dread
When my boss gives me his ear,
Isn't much I leave unsaid,
But it's never insincere.

I'm just about a pauper
(thanks to Washington D.C.)
An avid coupon shopper
Cashiers hide when they see me,
I try to live life proper
A credit card refugee,
You're tall tale tellin' whopper?
Then I'll be avoiding thee.

A poetic licensee,
Words I sip in endless fount,
There's no charge for registry
(and I drink in large amounts)
While some view such poverty
Communistic tantamount,
Tis a life of honesty,
Tell me please does that not count?

© Copyright 2001 Richard S. Wells jr. - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
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1 posted 2001-06-17 02:59 PM


Tis a life of honesty,
Tell me please does that not count...of course it does...what else is there?

Poet deVine
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2 posted 2001-06-17 03:09 PM


I can see that you are a true poet, though you say you only just 'took this up'...and an honest person is GOOD to find!  


*just glad I'm not your boss!  

Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-06-17 03:48 PM


Wonderful format and phrasing RSWells ... much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

RSWells
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4 posted 2001-06-17 03:48 PM


Perhaps there has been a poet here for a score and a half years but I took up the pen just last year and look forward to an honest relationship with this site.


Lone Wolf
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5 posted 2001-06-17 04:38 PM


Wow, the truth just smacks you in the face here.  Wonderful write, RS.  Looking forward to more.

Welcome to Passions.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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6 posted 2001-06-17 05:05 PM


Boy I wish they all knew you like I do Richard, this was from your heart, and honestly I can say you are about the "most honest darn guy I know", and I loved this poem too  

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~

RSWells
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7 posted 2001-06-17 06:06 PM


Wow! I'm heartened by the friendly atmosphere here. Thank you all.


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2001-06-17 07:09 PM


Enjoying you immensely!
Logan
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9 posted 2001-06-17 07:46 PM


honesty, honor, knowing what life should be, what more can one ask for for the sake of humanity...smile, nice read
serenity blaze
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10 posted 2001-06-17 11:18 PM


Welcome to Passions RS...after reading? I know you are a welcome addition! Look forward to seeing more of you in the future!

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11 posted 2001-06-17 11:40 PM


It's nice to hear a new voice.  Welcome and good luck with your poetry.  I haven't been writing for more than a couple of years either.  It's easy to get hooked.  Joyce
RSWells
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12 posted 2001-06-18 12:10 PM


Thank you very much kind people.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

Sweeetsuz
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13 posted 2001-06-18 01:51 AM


I just finished reading this one at the "other place" and it is just a funny here.... Well written

Blessed be and merrily met with good thoughts and feelings to all


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