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............Your Love.............
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............Your Love............. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Your Love in the hours weaved one can find believe in you come, find your quiet one hears your great laugh I have heard your other voice by your side, my choice oscillating thoughts sweep me back to you again just to stir your heart come, deem, come, quiet wrap me round your senses keen swift then comes our night sweet delight come soon promises of hearts in tune by full gleam of moon I am yours in trow in the past, as in the now your love suits my vow |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I would say in ponderous pause you've found much ink of think ! This is so lovely. Wonderful flow from heart aglow. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"oscillating thoughts sweep me back to you again just to stir your heart" Love it. Beautiful writing, Sunshine Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sigh, Sunshine, your words flow like the mountain stream, slowly moving with freshness and giving a peace of contentment...gentle smile |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
come, deem, come, quiet wrap me round your senses keen swift then comes our night sweet delight come soon promises of hearts in tune by full gleam of moon I am yours in trow in the past, as in the now your love suits my vow ************************** Oh.....dear..... This is so beautiful.......eloquant The flow of your words is just wonderful {{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}} Thank you ************************** It's only me.......only me I hope that would suffice eternally {{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}} [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 06-16-2001).] |
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autumn Junior Member
since 2001-06-08
Posts 44Maine |
Beautiful. Truly enjoyed. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now this just flows off of the page like water. . . the feelings are wonderful. . . it's almost like a dream. . . well done my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kari, everything they all said  sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dearest sister and keeper of my soul  Thank you this is beautiful, Take care love as always Puck   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Truly beautiful. |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
A wonderful love, indeed. Best wishes. |
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