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Open Poetry #14

A mans Quest..

Hollowman
Member

since 2001-06-01

Posts 117

0 posted 2001-06-17 10:53 AM

A woman oh yes is she
A woman to hold for me
I travelled far, I travelled wide
and won her loving heart inside
Found It I did, and yes I knew
this woman showed me her love
so true.

Smiling and happy she makes me
with her words she baits me
Tempt and jest, laugh and sing
I give her my heart sealed with a ring
So be my girl forever
and hold me close at night
And remember my love so true
the future has never looked
so bright.
Rich-

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2001-06-17 10:58 AM

You've captured such a wonderful feeling and mood here Rich ... nicely done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

2 posted 2001-06-17 11:02 AM

...the thoughts and feelings you display make me yearn for one to direct such love and affection toward me...I love the tenderness shown here.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-06-17 11:07 AM

Very endearing...surely she said, "Yes!"

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-06-17 11:11 AM

Hollowman,
AMEN.

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