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Thoughts In The Night |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: Thoughts in the night Each day we weave a subtle thread. A slender thread within our head. This thread may hang us from a post Or serve us glories road of host. Our breath makes dance the canopy, Makes nuance of the things we see. Extracted from the ebb and flow Exacting things we wish to know. The web evolves shread by shread. It is our bed our water shed. But all the treasures that are sown, Are blown away like dust is blown. Each seed tried and tied to plight Lights the soul a candles light. But time moves in leaps and bounds As ravens perch the trees around. With constant wonder of the deed. We live and die and birth new seed. A process we call genesis And often named a nemesis We pay each day a living toll But are not privy of the goal. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
..."...often named a nemesis..." yes yes yes yes yes! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Bowing to you, Master Poet Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you and glad you agree. *L* Elizabeth, Please start putting your poems in book form and I'll buy the first book, signed of course. Love sy |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Our breath makes dance the canopy, Makes nuance of the things we see. Extracted from the ebb and flow Exacting things we wish to know.' You are just a dadgum GOOD poet ! ! Happy Father's Day to you ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you for the dadgum and happy fathers day. love ya Sy |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The web evolves shread by shread. It is our bed our water shed. But all the treasures that are sown, Are blown away like dust is blown. Each seed tried and tied to plight Lights the soul a candles light. But time moves in leaps and bounds As ravens perch the trees around. With constant wonder of the deed. We live and die and birth new seed. A process we call genesis And often named a nemesis We pay each day a living toll But are not privy of the goal. =================================== Reading you is just way too cool words of wisdom ... the golden rule Lessons of life penned in perfect rhyme prophecies handed down thru time We grow when you share your thoughts in the night For in your words we witness your wisdom's light Happy Fathers Day sweet Stinky *winkiewinkie* love ya, Tinkerbell  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
From the internal rhymes to the beautiful flow ... much enjoyed Seymour!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Like it all but the 1st and last stanza I really like!...I like the part about the canopy and about the dance, too. Oh, gee, thanks for sharing your 'night thoughts'! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you for the happy fathers day and your ever glowing comments. Love ya Sy Kit, Thank you my friend. VAS, I'll share my night thoughts with you anytime. LOL |
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