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Dom Mart
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since 1999-08-17
Posts 164
Florida

0 posted 2001-06-17 07:51 AM




Some genius built a robot
Like a metal dinosaur.
Its steely jaws can pulverize
An aging junkyard car.

The builder found an empty lot
Where he can demonstrate
The monster, who'd much rather
Have dinner on the interstate.

© Copyright 2001 Dom Mart - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2001-06-17 07:55 AM


A great visual Dom Mart, much enjoyed this clever desciptive verse!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
2 posted 2001-06-17 08:22 AM


Very cleverly written.........Sue

Suetang

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