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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I set aside my empty time And poured within a dash of rhyme To tell myself and all would hear How much I need to have you near But you would fall away from me If loud and clear I let you see Inside a heart that pours it’s time Into the waste of sing-song rhyme Fall away…. Hear the voice spread and say… I love you deeply… I cannot be with one like you… When you close your mind Loss of truth a subject to I love you so I love you so A sin to let you know? Poetry I love you Poetry I love you Don’t fall away As all my loves surely do [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 06-17-2001).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Poetry couldn't fall away from you Walty... you ARE poetry. Oh and  Maree  |
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Eye Junior Member
since 2001-06-10
Posts 28Outside Looking In |
I have found that poetry is a love that holds true, so long as you cherish your muse, by the giving of self. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks you two yuh I wanted to write this one a lil bad to show that all I had to offer Poetry was simple rhyme and sing song quality and to show the fear that it wouldn't be enough for my "love" and that it would fall away. (sniff) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ I'll have a Rhyme on-the-rocks with a dash of Walt on the rim !  Wonderfully written, poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You have a poetic heart sir!  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and I shall have what Marge is having....as it sounds quite good to me! O Poetry! |
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