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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-06-16 10:53 PM



Delicate Hue Of Rendezvous

~*Marge Tindal*~

In delicate hue of rendezvous
upon night canvas flung
Penetrating hush
is quietly brushed
in twilight colors hung
Crimson-crimped curls cascading
cerulean sky captivates pink sigh
Waltz of sun curtsey's to indigo
ere the quilting hour draws nigh
Twilight summons stars to play
sky palette ruptures in glow
Delicate hue of rendezvous
blended in day's repose
Blink not of the eye
for fear of miss
Delicate hue
Twilight
kiss


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
FireDancer123
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1 posted 2001-06-16 10:59 PM


That was beautiful. You're style's quite unique. I like it a lot.  
::write forever::

"If you've never stared off into the distance, then your life is a shame." - A.Duritz
"Eat drink and be merry, for tomorrow we die." - Dave Matthews

Lone Wolf
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2 posted 2001-06-16 11:03 PM


Very lovely write.  It exudes a quiet comfort throughout.  I love the picture!  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-06-16 11:07 PM


Ah, I love the colours of this kiss... beautiful  


JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-06-16 11:25 PM


This is lovely Marge...James
Logan
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5 posted 2001-06-17 01:12 AM


Aww, geez, Marge, you make everything live in harmony and rapture both. Really like this..gentle smile
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6 posted 2001-06-17 02:13 AM


WOW!  I tried to do an arrowhead once for a darn hour, and poof magical Marge, just whips one up in whimisical hues of fuzzy, wuzzy words just like that, with not a flint out of place!  WOW!

~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them as tomorrow may never come ~*~

ethome
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7 posted 2001-06-17 06:28 AM


Beautiful words put together so very well .....Well done Marge...as usual....you're the greatest!
Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2001-06-17 09:33 AM


FireDancer~
'Unique' is a nice compliment ... thank you.

LoneWolf~
The photo is so serene, I agree.
Many a Florida sunset goes to sleep with just that lovely glow.
Nice to know you enjoyed it.
Thanks, gal.

PoeMinister~
And I thank you for enjoying it, sir.

JamesMichael~
Thank you very much.

Logan~
'Harmony and rapture' ...
What a lovely blend of thought.
Thanks my friend.

Mysteria~
LOL !  I didn't 'try' to do one ...
It just plopped itself to the page as I wrote - HONEST !
Thank you, gal !

ETHome~
I appreciate your comments so much.
You make me feel really good about what I write.
Thank you most sincerely.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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