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Eye of the Needle/ Eye of the Storm
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Eye of the Needle/ Eye of the Storm |
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Eye Junior Member
since 2001-06-10
Posts 28Outside Looking In |
Calm describes the eye storm swirling silent science lies peace within to thread the eye of the needle blind red swollen hung lamplights forever trying dying present soul malnutrition past defined bread water luxuries design awake tracing oblivion motion out of time transfixed unmovable melody inside out surrounds untouched starving soul ravaged hope where is peace within the eye bloody the rainbow rising hopes lynched acceptable signs of being never quite rooted bloomed inward defiant raging 'gainst the sky the needle pierces the eye and all is red dripping curtains that stains the glass of the shattered eye [This message has been edited by Eye (edited 06-17-2001).] |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
even though the eye of the storm is completely at peace the remainder of this has stark, painful images raging about it well-done contrast |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sharp imagery evoked with this. Nicely written. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well written piece! Enjoyable read! The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your writing is...amazing...and familiar. I like breaking it apart to see how my mind takes in the different messages of its intent, whether they were intended or not, you give much in your weave, and each time I read it over, I come up with a new shawl for my shoulders. Well done, and thank you! |
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