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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-06-16 05:23 AM



Amature2...thank you...I must have been sleeping...but you reminded me of something I had forgotten...THANK YOU

Dreams Do Come True

I have walked away
from moon beams
because I had learned
they were others dreams
ones that
I had picked
but caused far
too much conflict
and once again when I was
willing to walk away
destiny called me
back to stay
and it won’t be so easy
to pacify me now
there is a dream
I will allow
this dream
I can make come true
awake now
I feel anew
for it is the dream
that I reserved
one that I truly
do deserve

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)       Shakespeare


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snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
1 posted 2001-06-16 08:28 AM


'I have walked away
from moon beams
because I had learned
they were others dreams'

You've penned some great lines here...I can totally relate to this, too...I love it!

sp  

I hopelessly, helplessly, wonder why
Everything gotta change around me
I’d tell it to your face,
But you lost your face along the way...

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
2 posted 2001-06-16 09:22 AM


I hope they do come true.  Sometimes, it just takes us a little while to find them.  Good write.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Amature2
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since 2001-01-08
Posts 416

3 posted 2001-06-16 11:25 AM


1slick_lady, Thank you, I believe this is the first time i have inspired someone to write a poem.

We all have a dream we put in reserve
A dream we keep having, and know we deserve
A dream we all wish, and want to come true
A dream of hope and happiness, a dream made for you
Today is yesterdays tomorrow
From your poem "Destiny" these words i borrow

"destiny
sweet destiny
I hear you
calling my name
soon
we will be together
one and the same"

JLR
Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-06-16 03:12 PM


Sweet inspiration...well deserved, well done!
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