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0 posted 2001-05-23 09:08 PM


Everett Marcel
~*Marge Tindal*~

If timing is everything,
why do I have so much of it and you so little ?
Why does life keep on ticking me,
when your hands no longer spin me 'round ?
I would wait in the garden by the sundial,
if I believed the gnomon of you
would cast a long shadow across my face in time.



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-05-23 09:11 PM


You've got to know....this likes me in every beam and shadow that can be had....

my Marge....oops...

got proprietary there....

OUR marge.....

hugs, you!

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2 posted 2001-05-23 09:32 PM


Outstanding Marge....hugs to you...


Lauren~


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Nothing Beautiful In This World
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All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."


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3 posted 2001-05-24 01:46 AM


Karilea~
Yes, I would have felt you reading and enjoying it.
Thank you for the 'proprietary' ...  

GreenEyes~
I am so very pleased you enjoyed it.
Thank you soooooo much.
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-05-24 08:27 PM


Oh sunny one, I loved this, and how the heck did I miss one go figure that!  

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5 posted 2001-05-24 08:38 PM


Mysteria~
It was hidden in the shadows ? ?

Thank you, lovely lady.
I'm so pleased to share it with you.
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2001-05-27 07:38 AM


Margie girl this is excellent love, I love this one, I can feel the sun on my face here.
Truly outstanding, I love this. Fabulous work
and I love you too Margie girl, this is inspired, pure magic

Take care, love and  warm stuff
                Mushy
                

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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7 posted 2001-05-27 07:40 AM


Marge this is so deeply touching!       Wonderful write!

Time is a shadow!

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8 posted 2001-05-27 02:54 PM


Marsha~
Thank you, lovie.
This one mysteriously wrote itself
and I've yet to figure out the connection. (?)

ETHome~
Thank you for letting it touch you.
My muse was quick to pen it with conviction.
~*Marge*~

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9 posted 2001-06-16 02:37 AM


WOW. This strikes chords deep within, Marge. I've missed SO much here. sigh, especially all my friends. And gardener me has a thing for sundials too! This is beautiful.
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10 posted 2001-06-16 02:26 PM


Serenity~
I should have known this one would have eventually seek you ...

Someday I hope to know why it landed in my well of thought~
I know no one by the name of Everett Marcel~
yet the name continues to encircle me ...
Shadows on the sundial of time ... interesting to me.

Thanks, gal !
~*Marge*~


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